DADDY

by Black~Rose   Mar 25, 2005


You're are always there
Even in your prayers
You told me not to go for him
But I did anyways
I've pissed you off but still you're there
You know I've never meant to hurt you
I love you more than anything
I would die if I ever broke a promise
Now that you've proved me wrong about a guy
I'm trusting you're words
I don't understand how you put up with me
But I'm glad you do
I can't live without you
I need you here
When I finally become the woman I want to be
I want you there
I'm only a teeanager but when I do become more
I'll ALWAYS be Daddy's little girl!
Forever and for always
Without you daddy by my side I wouldn't have anyone to turn to
Daddy, I love you

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  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    You're are always there
    *Should this be YOU*

    But I did anyways
    I've pissed you off but still you're there
    *Should anyways be ANYWAY and I think the profanity takes away from your piece try using PEEVED or something else similar*

    Besides that hun its a great piece that I found touching personally and a pleasure to read keep up the great work sweety hope you can work with my feedback

    Eirisa