Wow u can tell u put alot of time in this poem and so much emotion and true feelings. That is what I like to see in a poem. Good job! I will have to read some more of ur poems I don't think I have read any of them before! Check out mine if u would Thanx and Take Care!

wow wow wow this is soooooo powerful i loved it. a tiny bit long but u rly convveyed ur feelings great work xxxxx

Hey Sonya! Just a couple suggestions...On an cold endless night= On A*** cold endless night...and Make your "i's" capital..you're improtant gurl show it lol...sorry just a big thing I have with ppl not capitalizing their i's. Great poem tho! Keep up the good work.

wow very good! 5/5 keep writting!

much love
savannah