Wow, that was awesome! Very excellent job! And excellent rhyming! (",)

~Krissy

chocolate brown eyes~ how cute! such a sweet poem. keep writing and keep'em coming~

5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

Love, Nidhi's Amit.

i really love that. i liked that it was short and the ending was my favouirte, i loved the way it started the same each time.
well done - i loved it - keep it up

check out some of my poems if u like.
id love ur opinion on my lastest poems 'the boy with no name part 1 &2' as the title suggests theres 2 seperate peoms connected.

all the best Holly

whoa pretty deep
nice poem

Unloved ♥

I think this is your best poem, dear. It was amazing. You keep on getting better with every poem you write. Keep up the good work!

-Ice