Oh! wow! nobs, you are doing well. Excellent poem. I loved the 3rd verse. Keep writing and keep learning from me ;-)

5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

Love, Nidhi's Amit.

Hey there,
i think this poem is awesome. nice work and congradulations, i think you could have had a better ending, it seemed to end so suddenly, but everything good must come to an end i guess. nice work !!!!
Ben