in stanza 5, I think you meant "minute" but otherwise, beautiful poem Jacklynn! -5

With love,
Heather

"If he would come home any minuet?"
- minute?

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This is very sad girl, very very sad. And not weak at all! I liked the way you showed the reader the true "childlike" emotions. It was very well written. Great work my friend. <3

^^Kal.

really good...i agree with 'kalah'...
xox