by Carmen Mar 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
This pain inside me won't go away, |
by Kalika
Another poem I can relate to, great job....I relate so well to your poems, and I really enjoy reading them...another 5..... |
by ScarletHaze
wow that was ace! xxxxxxxxxxxx |
by Brookeღ
Amazing poem! The rhyming was great! Good emotion! Take Care! Brooke |
I liked it alot but try change it near the end a little bit because to me it sounds the rhyming is a little forced.. I gave it a 4 |
Good work!! Amazing poem! |