My Broken Heart

by Carmen   Mar 25, 2005


This pain inside me won't go away,
And oh how I hope it won't forever stay,
For it's breaking me up inside,
So hard to see it because it always hides.
The pain is only revealed to me,
And nobody else can see,
How much this really hurts,
Can't be explained by just mere words.
Just for this pain to leave
Would be my biggest relief,
So I no longer have to cry every night,
And this hurt I no longer have to fight.
Nobody would ever believe,
How my body leaves you so deceived,
You think I'm alright,
With a smile in your sight,
But I'm not OK,
Back and forth I sway,
Sometimes I have hope,
Sometimes all I can do is mope.
You were the one who caused this,
When she was the one to receive your kiss,
And you gave her your heart,
When I was the one who loved you from the start.
My soul will paint you a sad picture of art,
Showing you my sad, broken heart.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    Another poem I can relate to, great job....I relate so well to your poems, and I really enjoy reading them...another 5.....

    Kalika

  • 19 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    wow that was ace! xxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Amazing poem! The rhyming was great! Good emotion! Take Care! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I liked it alot but try change it near the end a little bit because to me it sounds the rhyming is a little forced.. I gave it a 4

  • 19 years ago

    by *HauntedByMemories*

    Good work!! Amazing poem!