My best friend ((made changes.....should i keep them or not??))

by GoodMorning   Mar 25, 2005


He always listens
we never fight
he is my pocket knife
he lets me bleed
and cry my tears
releases the pain
before i go insane
he is now my best friend
i know he will be there till the end
unlike all the others
who left me in the dark of the night
all alone and ready to die
but dont worry
he won't let me say goodbye
at least not tonight
he is the one who gives me the strength
to keep myself alive

**hhmmmm.......i made some changes, but im not sure if i like them or not, let me know what you think....i would really appreciate it, thanks =)**

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  • 19 years ago

    by þŗ℮††ỵ ġįŗłş мåk℮ ġŗåv℮ş. ♥ ××

    i didnt read the poem before hand, but i really like this one, good job x

  • 19 years ago

    by kayla

    hey the changes are great i think it was great b4 but i like this too!! many hugs
    ~kaya~

  • 19 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    i liked it great write and i think the changes were good you made it longer which i thought made it even better well done 5/5 and thanks for your comment much appreciated luv jen x x x take care x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    didnt see the rough copy but these changes look good, but the knife isnt worth it....stay strong and oh jus to let u know ,ur on my faves too so keep on writin

    ~¤´¨)
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    (¸.·´ (¸.·´`·-----~> Happy Easter!

    All The Love In The World,
    ~*Heather M Craig*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Ronn

    hey! thanx for leavin sumthing! .. your good too!!

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