Nice write, last one was nice too~

5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

In Love Amit

keep the changes its really good

Hes not worth it

hey! thanx for leavin sumthing! .. your good too!!

didnt see the rough copy but these changes look good, but the knife isnt worth it....stay strong and oh jus to let u know ,ur on my faves too so keep on writin

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(¸.·´ (¸.·´`·-----~> Happy Easter!

All The Love In The World,
~*Heather M Craig*~

i liked it great write and i think the changes were good you made it longer which i thought made it even better well done 5/5 and thanks for your comment much appreciated luv jen x x x take care x x x

hey the changes are great i think it was great b4 but i like this too!! many hugs
~kaya~

i didnt read the poem before hand, but i really like this one, good job x