awwwwwww thats so sweet. Its a nice poem though wish i could be like that to my ex-

Wow.. that is really good. I can totally relate to that.
thanks for commenting on mine

If this is about you like a boy that is with another girl..I'm kind of going threw the same thing. They are not dating, but I like him so much (I just got of the phone with him), and I want to be with him, but right now all he wants is to be free to do what he wants. Everyone knows that we like each other, and a lot of people think we should be together, but like I said he wants to be free right now, and there is this other girl that just won't step out of MY light, in his eye's I hate it. I know how you feel, just keep on keeping on. Read some of my new stuff...or e-mail me.

i like ur poems, keep up the good work and keep writing.

hey i thought i would check yours out sinse you checked mine out.This is a great poem.But never let anyone get you down cause guys come and go he just wasen't the right one.Keep your head up and keep God 1st!!

thanx for commenting on my poem "an understanding friend" and yes I know most of my poems begin to go down hill at the end lol I have trouble ending my peoms but n e wayz.... I like this poem and also "trust" they were both great. You're a good writer, keep up the good writing 'n laterz ;-)

Great work... crappy feelings always make great poems...Xox Sherrie

this was a good poem altho i think the ryhming is alittle weak and forced. i know this may sound harsh (ive had it sed few times lol) but had nice message
hope u dont mind me commenting
take care
xxxLoUxxx

Wow, I relate so well to this poem, I feel exactly the same way about someone.....great write....you did an excellent job....I gave you a 5.....

Kalika

That was really awesome. I also feel the same way when I let go someone and now I know she was happy w/ it. About the poem it was well written it flows very well and ful of feelings. Great work!!! 5/5 =)

Could you comment on my new poem titled My Story PArt II thanks!!!=)

wow that was amazeing i love your use of words........ fabulous work! >>5/5<<
bec

hey....thanks for commenting on my poem!! i loved this one it souds exactly like me.....well i gave you a 5/5 keep it up!
-amanda

good work, and thats real sweet

i loved the first paragraph but then personally i think the second one needs some work but i liked this poem alot i think your a talented writter
>>5/5<<
bec

This was ok but it left me wondering, Why you would ever write this and what were you really telling the boy. Yes he is happy but what effect does it have to you. Should he even care these are the answers I was really waiting for Oh well nice try.

It was a great and meanigful poem, but the rhyming was a little shaky.

good...

hey i liked the poem and wwhat it said, but the rhyme did feel a little forced. well done tho :)

I like this but you definatly need to work on vocab... rhyming me and see and you and do can only be used so many times