Comments : She lay there

  • 19 years ago

    by tictac

    please Rate my poems i work so hard on them

  • 19 years ago

    by Zero Cool

    i can see this one took alot of heart into it and that it is very well spoken

  • 19 years ago

    by SSBAL

    very good poem, u have great potential, LIVE UP TO IT!
    luv ya
    jo