by Katie Lynn Mar 26, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I understand it now, |
by Pianist
Not too bad. Provide a sense of flow for the reader. Some lines need a little bit of revisement, but besides that you did a good job. Read some of my stuff if you ever get a chance. |
by Just Lucy
i dont think u could become a better poet coz that poem just showed me, ur like the best poet already, ur poems are trurely wonderful, keep writing, dont waste ur talent!!! |
I care I might not know you but I care |