Omg. That was so so so so so so good. It must be the best that I have read on this site so far. I'm so sorry about your mum. That must have been awful. I think its good that you have put it into a poem though. I think that you have bringed alot of emotions to alot of women. I really think that you shoud get this poem published. Its so touching, and it gets the point across.

All the best, Cat

wow sierra thts soooo good and rly rly powerfull it brought tears 2 my eyes xxxxxxxxxx

that was so sad yah that is so true. you should keep writting i love it byby

Wow. This is the best poem that I have read on this site so far. This is brillient. It is touching, and it does get the point across.I think that this poem has helped, and will help alot of women out there. I seriously think that it should be published. You have an extrodinary talent. Please, keep up the good work, this is so good.

I like it a lot. 5/5.. well done.

Hey sierra! We're all missing you loads! The forum is no fun without you! Come back soon!
Rachelxx

if it where me, i would kill him in his sleep and give his bodie to the bores.

omg that's so sad....I am so sorry I dont really know what to say. If you ever need to talk I'm here. Nice write. >3jess

Very tragic experience that you're mother had to live through....i liked how you put in what could've been her perspective though. Nice message at the end. :) Take care...

Peaces. //ari\\

OMG! (Tacles Blue Eyes) U POOR GIRL!(hugs)

This popem...its way too detailed for life...great poem...I hope things go better for u...(hugs)

That is a truly amazing poem...wow. I'm so sorry this happened to ur mum, i agree abuse is horrifying. Really great and inspiring (the last couple of verses)
great work 5/5

take care xoxo

Great poem. abuse is a terriable thing, i have a very violent father so can relate to this to an extent. i love the last stanza, really sums up the whole poem

This is really good, but its wicked sad.. im sorry that ur mom had to go through somthing like this.. that sucks.... well keep up the good work!!!
amanda

Aww yeah abuse does seem to be everywhere these days, but that was a really great poem i loved the topic of it really great. xoxox Rach

FANTASTIC! what a wonderful and touching poem...beautiful and so true! i hate to think of all those poor people out there that are suffering in silence, and being either pysically or emotionaly abused everyday. I think this poem is very inspiring and gives those unfortunate people out there, something to relate to. realy sorry to hear that your mother was so unfortunate and has so many bad memories, but im sure she knows that as long as she has you, she will always has love.
kepp writing
take care
x x x x

Omg this is my fav i was treated like this when i was a kid this brought tears to my eyes

This is a really powerful poe, the feelings and descriptions are so strong that the reader it almost trasported there and feels everything the characterdoes. you wrote this is such a powerful way... i really don't know waht else i can say...

Good poem but crazzy... why someone so smart do such a thing?? someone who knows whats going on emotionaly... someone who should be stronger then others because u can see the path 2 end this strife but yet u choose a different one?? why?? think iz ez'er 2 feel sorrow then joy? lol once u get on that path believe me only thing that can take u off for a lil bit iz the strongest power in the world...

anywho.... great poem, felt it... read it a few times to catch the full feel of it over an over...believe it or not some pplz cant speak from the heart... dont let ur god givin talent go 2 w8st

Oh my gosh...i cried..i swear..

this is amazing..and i never ever had hope(im dealing with abuse) until i read this poem... excellent job...i love it..5/5 and im adding you to my favorites.