Proud

by Carlee Ann   Mar 26, 2005


I am so happy about this
So proud of this feat
How do you continue to amaze?
You never succumbed to defeat

You've made it this far,
There is no turning back
You kept the blade clean
No skin slashed, no vein cracked

All this time passed along
With you in my every prayer
I worried constantly in my mind
I wanted so much to be there

But take a look
Aren't you proud?
Look how far you have come
Your actions have spoken so loud.

This is all I ever wanted
For you to be happy and strong
I thought you were so very weak
When really you've had it in you all along

I'm glad that I was there to help
And I'm unbelievably thrilled you made it through
I hope you realize, more than ever
That I am so proud of you!

**To Zach - I am proud of you! (Sorry the poem sucks... lol!)**

*Car*

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  • 19 years ago

    by troubled

    wow great poem carlee. it doesnt suck at all! keep up the great work!

    *jenny*

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    lol, ok, gnite, hon! Ty for the overly kind comments... hehe! Read Cookie Cutter, when you wake up!
    Lov ya!
    Car

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    OMG!!!! Carlee, Zac is going to freaking LOVE This!!! I mean wow!! This poem does SOO not suck!!! It kicks booty my deary!! lol! I'm going to bed, my vision is blurry and I can't concentrate. Love you lots, ttyl, bye!

    ~Sierra