by Erika Mar 26, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Staring black eyes, looking all at me. |
by Amanda
Hey it's very sad! Deep, emotinal and just great! :) |
by D..
one more comment...you are a girl "contributing" to this life..with your great poetry...keep up the good work |
by Andrea
great poem!! |
by Georgi
wow this was reeeli powerful i loved it. i sensed anger and hope too, with the hole wing bit. loved it keep it up xxxxx |
wow very sad....great write though, expresses lots of emotions. -5 |