by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи Mar 26, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A beautiful child |
That's exactly how my parents treat me sometimes, except i have an older brother and he treats me like shit too! |
by Ferris
ok i think u should make it the child dies but her ghost like hauts the parents 4 eternety making their lives hell |
Great poem! sad but good and I think you should have a happy ending being as though that girl went through so much all ready |
Wow thats a great poem! I really don't know what a good title would be! |
thanks alicia I think I'll do that.... |