awesome poem you make some very good points! keep up the good work

so very true......and its sad that the world is like that, it really is.....but you helped make it a little more beautiful with this poem, it was amazing! keep it up!.......~hugs~......if you don't mind, let me know what you think of mine, im open to any suggestions you might have, i'd appreciate it......take care hun =)

-brittnay- ((5/5))

so true.. i like the idea of showing the different generations... 5/5

so sad..and so true..really well written!
keep up the good work..take care..
love tegan
xoxo

I liked this poem alot and the whole meaning behind it. 5/5