short and sweet.... excellent work LOVED IT >>5/5<<
bec xXx

i really liked that! it was simple & short enough so i didnt get bored and the point wasnt lost in endless lines.

it was also very sweet to read....
well done - keep it up.

check out some of my poems if u want.
id luv ur opinion on my latest 2 poems
'The Boy With No Name Part 1&2'

all the best - Holly

aww very awesome!! and adorable!! hehe...that's you! GO AMANDA!! LOL anyway, yea...so what's the catch has u know who asked you out yet?! let me inon the scoop!!~
*Brittany*

amanda~ i will continue to email u...but i have to leave this site..i'm so sorry, i will keep reading your poems, but i will not comment, for i will not have a user name anymore..i will explain in an email~