by Emilia Mar 26, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You are in this cheap hotel near San Francisco bay |
by steve
awesome emotion.....Im glad you ended it |
by Mel
I really like you style and I like your confessional ability. Check out the few Ive written if you would. What do you think? |
by Robert
Thare are bits and pieces of good writing here but it's so choppy and it hard to really get into it if your going to rythm let it flow if not just write I hope I am making some sense here |
by UM
Good message and there is alot of emotion packed into it...the flow/rythym of it isn't consistent. That would be my only suggestion to make it better. Good job. |
by Lecrissa
Great feelings. the anger realy comes through. |