This one is good, and I enjoyed reading something different. I bet there is something deep about this poem, some hidden meaning, but I suck at such things. What are you trying to tell people with this poem? Please tell me:P

I see you are from Sweden. That makes us neighbours.

*Norsk og stolt av det:P*

Hvor i Sverige?

Emotional Write, very expressive poem.

5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

Love, Amit

Very different from other poems, great idea!! i really loved it, though it was sad!!! How did you get the idea to it???
Hey, i'm from Denmark, so I'm a neighbour too....Mange hilsner herfra =0)

Jeg gir det 5...

nice poem!! keep it up!! :)

Oh boy do i like this... Isnt it the worst when you relize what everybody knew all along...Great poem...
Xox Sherrie

i like it, i'm sorry if that really happened though:( so many jerks out there...just like you said, when will they learn? I'm sure there's a great guy out there somwhere for you though:)
xxxChristinaxxx

Wow i really liked this. it was beautiful and kinda "dirty," and also maybe a bit sad. Glad påsk till dig ochså, 5/5!
SatuzKa
p.s thanks for your comment, i appreciated it a lot!

A bit of Sheryl crow in there i think!

very emotional i loved it xxxxxx

very emotional i loved it xxxxxx

very emotional i loved it xxxxxx

wow sorry bout that!!!!!! haha

Awesome poem! 5/5! I lied the emotion in it! Great job!

much love
savannah

This was okay, there wasn't really much flow to it, and the rhyme scheme wasn't uniform all the way through, which sometimes makes things hard to read.

Sorry I accidently pressed enter..... anyway, work on the rhyme scheme and over all flow of the poem. Long lines generally detract from poety so possibly work on seperating the first few lines. Keep writing!

good poem there but i have to agree with leah20 about the flow but thats just my opinion hope u dont mine :) i liked the message the poem portraied overall very good! if ya have the time check out some of mine...all comments welcome!
take care
xxxLoUxxx

Wow,that's a strong poem! Nice! Keep up the talent. You so get a 5/5! *thumbs up*

i think it was a great poem! cheaters are scum.... ick....

Great title, and great poem. I hope ot wasnt based on a true story.