OOoOoooOOooooo, Toni, that was absolutely brilliant!! Hurry up and finish it!! :-D!!! Great, GREAT job!!

wow, I really love the first two lines, I really relate!!! Great poem and perfect rhyme!!!

awww hun i no u sed its not finished but it is very good, needs an ending but what uve dun is really good, if i can help im here and u can always talk to me,
lots o luv,
ellie
xoxoxox

thanks Toni!! :-D. Really made me smile!!!

hun.... i know some of this was about me, mainly because you told me.... and i'm sorry hun, i am so sorry :-( *hugs* I Love You* xxx

Thanks everyone, its ok Oli xxx

Toni this is so relevant to me from about 36 different angles :(
It's so heartbreaking.

I'm sorry, I'll comment better later..

Thanku Laura xxx

loved the descriptions youve got in there, if its not finished then wow, its brilliant so far!! keep it up and take care always

lu -x-x-x-