Can't go on in this world (need help)

by jess   Mar 26, 2005


I cant go on,
in this world full of pain,
i no others are worse off,
so who am i to complain.

but everything is getting me down,
i would be better off dead,
everyone is telling me,
to just look ahead.

the days are so empty,
the nights so long,
i want darkness to creep upon me,
for i cannot stay strong.

i want to be loved,
not thought of in hate,
i need someone beside me,
but i fear it's to late.

I'm already scarred,
from all the abuse,
when I've been crying,
there is no excuse.

so i will leave it here,
and hope someone hears my plea,
and takes me by the hand,
to help me become free

please comment and vote as this is from the heart and i really do need help!

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  • 1 year ago

    by Liv

    Here for you if you need a friend

    • 1 year ago

      by jess

      Thankyou

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Oh poor you! were going through similar things then! I'll be ok just need some rest. I'll check out ur others later amanda :)

  • 19 years ago

    by FlamingRoses81

    Jess, please stay strong, I agree with poison ivy, they dont understand, but still one day it will all come together I know I don't really make sence but yeah And if you want to e-mail me or somthing I don't know of the addvice I could give but just know I'm here...

    ~Rain~

  • 19 years ago

    by sarah

    jess please dont do anything stupid, none of this is your falt, im here and always will be! be strong, please, dont let him win xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Poison Ivy

    Wow, that poem was intense!. Your a very good poet. Keep writing. And Jess i know that everyone keeps telling you to look ahead but yet they do not understand what you are going through. If they did then they would try to help you in another way. I have been to the point you have. The same state of mind as yours and the only way i got over it was when, the person that caused me that depression left. I do recommend you to see a psychiatrist and if you do, u have to let everything out, how u feel,etc. Dont hold anything in, no matter what it is because then you will not get better. If you ever need a buddy to talk to u can i.m. at SunshineLOLz19@aol.com. Hope to hear from you soon.