Faces in the clouds ©

by Georgi   Mar 26, 2005


Laid on my back and looking up,
you asked me what i saw.
the clouds, they told a story,
They are the key to heavens door.

Laid on my back i saw your face,
painted on a light blue sky.
no words you spoke, i saw your smile,
even though your up so high.

your face began to melt away,
like inks absorbed by water,
but in my heart you'll always stay,
a sister, a friend, a daughter.

Im sorry i could not protect you,
against this nasty place,
i'll be next, i'll walk beside you,
so once again i can see your face.

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  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Beautifully penned! Left a smile in my heart...keep it up~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    that is an excellent poem really nice and so sad 5/5. thank you for your lovely commment thats really kind of you and much appreciated take care much luv jen x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by UM

    Very nice. I'm not sure why this is rated so low, I thought it was very good. Thx for checking out my poem A Soldier's Mother.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    touching 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    wow very moving......i loved it. Flowed really well.. keep it up"

    take care

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