Little miss perfect

by ScarletHaze   Mar 26, 2005


Little miss perfect wondering why
her life became this bad she hopes to die
it was all because of him
the boy she had fallen for.

little miss perfect crying regrets
the love she felt caught in a net
the more she struggled he more it consumed
until overwhelmed she finally gave in.

little miss perfect was to naive
that he was the one she dared to believe.
until he proved her assumption was wrong
that he wasn't the one for her.

litle miss perfect was forced upon
forced to carry something she did not want.
she tried to be brave to be strong
but in the end she could not.

little miss perfect was found dead
she couldn't take it anymore.
she was buried with her unborn child
two bodies to one grave.

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  • 18 years ago

    by april

    GR8 POEM.SO POWERFUL YET SAD YET TRUE.IT'S LIKE YOU WROTE MY LIFE STORY

  • 19 years ago

    by Chit Cyn

    Repetition of lines made it a bit cliched like a song-poem of dark origin. As a whole, the rhymes blended well and effortful on structuring. The message was clear though odd, well, fictions make one imagine things beyond reality. Good write, hope its not true account, especially of urs, otherwise, ur not writing anymore, lol.

  • 19 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    OMG! OMG! What an incredible poem... i think that this deserves a rating of at least 10... what... wow! this is incredible work... the rythm, the............ last stanza! OMG what a sad poem, but those are the kinds of poems that i love! in my heart i give you a 100/5, but here i guess i am stuck with giving you a 5/5! INCREDIBLE! 5/5/5/5/5/5/5!

    ~stevie~
    ~yellowfeverlime~

  • 19 years ago

    by Suzy

    Wow this is such an awsome poem i really enjoyed reading it.. it's quite sad too and powerful. great write thanks for the awsome read :)
    love suzy
    xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    Nice job! I like the repetition in the first line and how it keeps changing. I love the 3rd stanza, and especially love how theres that final TWIST right at the end that just changes how it all seems to go, its quite captivating!

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