My new mum

by Amanda   Mar 26, 2005


You've been my mum for seven years,
and held my hand through all the tears,
If you hadn't taken me under your wings,
I wouldn't of had all the nicest of things,

You gave me your shoulder to cry on,
when my original parents were gone,
If i didn't have you to help me mend,
I wouldn't have met my bestest friend,

Thank you for caring, treating me well,
I was really hurting and you could tell,
You told me that it would be alright,
gave me cuddles every single night,

You are amazing, thank you so much,
For giving to me, your motherly touch,
If it wasn't for you, people wouldn't see,
the nice person i am, i wouldn't be me.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

This poem is for my foster mum cos she is great. As you can see i am having a thank you week for all the people who have influenced my life. Please comment, I would appreciate it very much.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Cassie

    hey that's awesome... i totally respect the idea of a thank-you week... that's cool... keep up the good writing... i know i've got a bunch of good reading ahead of me... i scrolled down the paige and saw like 30 poems i don't think i've read... it's kinda hard to remember which ones i have and haven't read...

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    really sweet poem and its good to let things out expecially through poetry
    hope u show this to ur foster mum !!! ??
    ..its such a nice uplifting poem and hope to read more.

    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    That was a very nice dedication of you! Left me speechless and I'm sure it would her too! Lovly Job! 5/5
    Kind Regards,
    ~Chelsey~

  • this is a really good poem. Your very talented. keep it up!
    xoxoxo
    ~Dra~