by Amanda
Oh so sad! Think it is very good though :) |
by GoodMorning
i liked this one a lot, has a lot of emotion......thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.......keep up the great work =)......laterzzz |
Maz, |
And I like the poem, the ending was a lil weaker than I expected but the beginning and middle was wonderful, it's amazing what the eyes can hide when so many are blinded by a smile! Stay strong sweetheart...and oh yeah, the title was Amazing, kinda lures you in =) |
by Timothy
once again, you've shattered my viewpoint on other poems. this is truly an ingenious work of impeccable proportions, and you deserve fully recognized credentials and rewarding praise for its' message. The imagery is especially detailed and paints a picture not worth a thousand words, but worth a thousand more pictures, each worth their own thousand words. No flaws except in vocabulary can be found, and that even is unnecessary to mention, since the meaning was easily derived regardless of the spelling. I seriously think your poems are a mark of expert craft*woman*ship and should be considered completely unmatched by someone with lowly skills such as mine. I can only hope to be able to one day compare myself to you, in a poetic sense of course. Thank you in all aspects of appreciation, I highly value the prospect of maintaing a semi-constant relationship with your abilities through this site. please do not ever refrain yourself, and spread your wings, not all are opposed to hearing you speak your mind. thank you again. |
by Natalie84
WHOA!!! A very strong and emotional poem! Though I don't fully understand one cutting themselves and truthfully never will, this was a very GOOD poem!!! very nice write~! 5/5 |