by Kiki Mar 26, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Hidden behind a mask, a face so reveling. |
Thats it. Secret love is a mask that will not come off, you highlight the suffering of secret love so well in this poem. 5++++ |
by Carmen
i've noticed youve added a few 'the's when there shouldnt be any... or is that part of the poem? hmm... oh well. it had great meaning to it, and i can totally relate to it. 4/5 |
by Aubrey
amazing!! great job, flowes nicely!! check mine out sometime, keep up the great work!!!<3 |