amazing!! great job, flowes nicely!! check mine out sometime, keep up the great work!!!<3

xoxo
Aubs

i've noticed youve added a few 'the's when there shouldnt be any... or is that part of the poem? hmm... oh well. it had great meaning to it, and i can totally relate to it. 4/5
p.s- please rate mine

Thats it. Secret love is a mask that will not come off, you highlight the suffering of secret love so well in this poem. 5++++