One brilliant artwork,I believe you have an excellent mastery of the linguistic.You deserve a 5 on this.Jeff

Beautifully written poem. Enjoyed. hugs, And Fisherman, you're blessed to have such a sweet and loving daughter as Sunny. She truly loves her Dad. Take Care, Hugs, *Ann*

aww i really liked that!!! flowed nicely!
check mine out sometime!!Keep up the great work!!<33

xoxo
Aubs

Hey, whats goin on? I liked this poem, nice work. When you get the chance, please check out my new poem “Dear Journal”. Plz rate and comment it. Thank you, I appreciate it (in advance)

Great Write...isn't it funny as a child we follow our instincts....as an adult we ignore them...or think geez I am just being paranoid....I am glad that you ran

Sir,

I am a nature buff and always enjoy nature poems. They way you described the incident made the reader feel that he was there, the imagery in the poem was extremely good. Thank you for sharing.

Regards,

Steve