A Day In The Life Of...Me

by Eibutsina   Mar 27, 2005


Aloneness…
Emptiness…
Solitude…
Isolation…
Then confusion…

Random…
Cluttered…
Catastrophe…
Riot…
Following an explosion…

Crash!
Boom!
ARGHHHH! Frustration!
Anger…
Hatred…
Rage…
A deathly silence…

Breath…
Tears…
Love…
Fears…
Again Aloness…

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  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oh Eirisa this peace truly made me smile...I'm so glad you wanted to experiment with a new kind of poem because you really made it work...I do have to agree...everyone has a time in their life when they feel just as you described..but people (like yourself) are much stronger then they know and we all can push through..stay smiling sis...thats one thing that will help you through! Amazing job once again!
    Love you always,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wonderfully written poem, i like it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Thankyou Heather...

    I dont know if this really defines my life at the moment but it surely does at some stage...thanks for your inspiring words hun...

    Donald thanks again my friend...not really having a downer day actually hun but its nice to know someone cares :o) Am having quite the opposite and wanted to experiment with some new kinds of poetry rather than my norm...your words are enough to make me smile anyday :o)

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    I used to live your life too it seems....ahh but hun, be strong :-) it'll all fade away with time, eh.....but great usage of otomotopias and adjectives and all of that good stuff hehe! -5

    ~¤´¨)
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    (¸.·´ (¸.·´`·-----~> Happy Easter!

    All The Love In The World,
    ~*Heather M Craig*~