I used to live your life too it seems....ahh but hun, be strong :-) it'll all fade away with time, eh.....but great usage of otomotopias and adjectives and all of that good stuff hehe! -5 |
by Eibutsina
Thankyou Heather... |
by Andrea
wonderfully written poem, i like it! |
by Chelsey
Oh Eirisa this peace truly made me smile...I'm so glad you wanted to experiment with a new kind of poem because you really made it work...I do have to agree...everyone has a time in their life when they feel just as you described..but people (like yourself) are much stronger then they know and we all can push through..stay smiling sis...thats one thing that will help you through! Amazing job once again! |