Comments : Life Cycle

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    yah, lol, Its just late for me. And I'm crying too. Look in the discussion forum, Sadness and Depression, read the topic that says My mom doesn't love me. I'm crying so hard right now!!

    I'll try to change that though.

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    I dunno. She's ashamed of me though.

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Hahaha, it isn't my first grandma who hates me. When I was 9 years old, I spent the summer with my step dad's parents, my grandparents. That summer was the worst. I got in so much trouble for the stupidest things. They wouldn't let me have private phone conversations with my mom. At the end of the summer, they decided that I wasn't welcome at their house anymore, me or my sister. So, I've been exiled from Michigan.

    I hate them so much!

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    hey stay strong. and i dont have to be your spine but i would like to be the chair you spine can rest in ok. if you ever need to talk let me know. i luv u lots aite. friend forever no doubt in my mind. peace

    Nick

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Holy muffin! Girl, this is one of your best. It really is... you kick major a**! We all love you lots! :) lylas
    Car

  • 19 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    WOW! Great poem hun! Keep up the great poems! ~5/5~
    Love alwayz....
    Haily
    XOXOXOOXO

  • 19 years ago

    by Maddie

    Your an amazing writer! this poem was beautiful, you have a lot of talent.

    thanks for commenting on my poem. I just joined this site yesterday

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    beautifully written!

  • 19 years ago

    by AngelsNana

    Hi Munchkin, I would also like to know how your Nana could hate you. I don't know about ya grandma but ya know ya Nana doesn't. You know my whole world has been center around you and Savannah. The poem is beautiful and it sounds like me and Papa. I am not ashamed of you and never have been. I wish I could hear from you guys because I worry about you but I understand. Just take care of each other is all I ask. Love Nana

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    r u aite?
    just wanted to know. hope your ok.
    Much Love

    Nick

  • 19 years ago

    by Ally xo

    sorry i haven't talked to u in a while. been going through some stuff..... i wrote a new poem call blue moon come cheak it out if yah like...well i will talk to u later and this poem was so so kool

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Sweetie where'd you go!! *hyperventilates* I miss you you know, i dont even wanna write anymore poems cause you arent here... please come back soon!
    much love,
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Aw very sad, i just read it. brilliant as always :)
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by In_Your_Eyes

    Wow! This is absolutely one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read!

  • 19 years ago

    by ~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~

    very interesting! i like it-like it! 25/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    Superb poem, girl.

    'Nuff said.

    B

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Lol, thank youuU!! lol. I'm glad you like it, Bret. More importantly, I'm glad you actually read it since you only read like 2 poems a day, lol! Thank you to everyone! :-D.

  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    Good poem it may be sad but it shows a positive vibe that life is one big eternal circle!

    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    ....It's bleeping wonderful! No complaints here. This have earned you a spot on my favourite's list! Lucky devil! =)

    My favourite lines were:

    "But though this end was painful
    The body of life is worthwhile
    Eventually the cycle will begin again
    Starting with a loving smile."

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nate

    Excellent poem Sierra. Your grasp of how life comes in full cycle is awesome. I loved the way you conveyed their shared loved in your poem. Keep up the good work.
    Nate aka "The Tie Guy"