by Nat the dreamer Mar 27, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
The ocean is calm, |
aw....the beginning was so romantic:) lol...this was a really great poem, you gotta lotta talent chica keep it up! i loved it 5/5 MuChLoVe~unseentears |
by AJ
Hey, I like it. You're really good. It flows really well. 5/5 |
THE IMAGERY AND FLOW OF THIS POEM IS OUTSTANDING |
by Lil Luce
wow! beautiful story and really nice how it was all a dream and espec loved the ending! please check out some of my work if u have the time! |
by l t b
love the story and rhyme. |