love the story and rhyme.

wow! beautiful story and really nice how it was all a dream and espec loved the ending! please check out some of my work if u have the time!
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xxxLoUxxx

THE IMAGERY AND FLOW OF THIS POEM IS OUTSTANDING

Hey, I like it. You're really good. It flows really well. 5/5

aw....the beginning was so romantic:) lol...this was a really great poem, you gotta lotta talent chica keep it up! i loved it 5/5 MuChLoVe~unseentears