The Future Of I.C. (I.V.)

by Dark Savior   Mar 27, 2005


The problem that i for-see
is we still have poverty

he stood there like before
casing his cheek with enough to be poor

we is it that you need a monument to show your status?
can somebody please explain what this radical concept is.

why is it that the white house has so many rooms?
few blocks away people sleepin and asking for food for free

we are the least humane, we will pull an I.V.
i can understand but let the hubby give her the morphine

watch him back away with noting to say
because he would know he's a murder that day!

© 2005 Shaun M.K

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, Shaun. but in the start of the 5th line, you've written "we is it", i think it should be "why is it"... keep writing ~
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Hey babe, must've just missed you tonight :( Well, great poem, I've always viewed things this way but the bigger pictures of life just arent open for change obviously~ 5

    I love you,
    forever yours,
    Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    If you have commented or voted or even read this poem. I want to thank you before hand and know that i will try to return a comment to your poem if you comment on mine, it might take me a while but i will return it eventually.

    Thank you in Advance.

    Shaun Aka Dark Savior

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