Comments : The Future Of I.C. (I.V.)

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    If you have commented or voted or even read this poem. I want to thank you before hand and know that i will try to return a comment to your poem if you comment on mine, it might take me a while but i will return it eventually.

    Thank you in Advance.

    Shaun Aka Dark Savior

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Hey babe, must've just missed you tonight :( Well, great poem, I've always viewed things this way but the bigger pictures of life just arent open for change obviously~ 5

    I love you,
    forever yours,
    Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, Shaun. but in the start of the 5th line, you've written "we is it", i think it should be "why is it"... keep writing ~
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit