by Dark Savior
If you have commented or voted or even read this poem. I want to thank you before hand and know that i will try to return a comment to your poem if you comment on mine, it might take me a while but i will return it eventually. |
Hey babe, must've just missed you tonight :( Well, great poem, I've always viewed things this way but the bigger pictures of life just arent open for change obviously~ 5 |
by Amit
Excellent write, Shaun. but in the start of the 5th line, you've written "we is it", i think it should be "why is it"... keep writing ~ |