Wow, baby this was AWESOME!
I love you're poems and I wish I could be as talented as you were. Keep it up <33

that was truely amazing. it built up the energy until the very last line... wow. its an amazing talet to make ppl feel this!

i hope for everyone sake this isnt a real story.... if so im sorry.

u have talent - i almost lost my breath when i read it! 5/5!

check out some of my peoms if u want.
id luv ur opinion on my 2 newest poems which are continuious of one another called
"the Boy With No Name part 1 & 2'

all the best ~ holly