by Aubrey Mar 27, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
-He's watching you, don't make any sudden moves,...the shadows scare him. He likes the scent of you, he smells you at night, don't you ever feel him? Cuz he's right be hind you - |
Thats kind of intriguing. you kind of want to know who this peron/thing is and know why. which is a great effect for a poem to have. seriously i loved ti. incredible. |
Creates a lot of suspense, I love that |