Let Me Live Again

by Maddie   Mar 27, 2005


When the stress of it all
burns my mind like acid tears
And the dark pain inside
surfaces my deep enchanted fears

My heart explodes like balls of fire
and my head spins round and round
No one can stop me from myself
until the truth has been found

The pain slaps me across the face
and the entire body goes numb
Nothing is left to feel
nothing inside me seems real

Light as a feather
my soul can fly high
Far from this place
where no one lives a lie

Safe from the troubles
so i never burn again
Dead on the inside
let me live again

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  • 19 years ago

    by (*andrea*hurtinside*)

    Try and use some punctuations. ( . , ! ?)

  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    Very good poem...

    IT flows very well, and is filled with emotions=)

    The rhyming scheme is good, and your use of words match the flow perfectly..

    Great poem...

    Really deep

  • 19 years ago

    by miss scooby

    WOW....SPEECHLESS that was a very good peice of poetry. The use of imagery was unbeleivable and i am in awe over how well i was able to literally picture something that was explain sooo well...it was a sad sad poem thou but written so very beautifully.
    take care always 5/5
    ♥(v)Χ§.§ÇÕÕ(3¥¹º¹ ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by W H O R E

    Very nice, I can relate to this. Hold strong hunz, *hug*
    xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    No Wonder This Poem Is Featured!! Its Golden 5/5!! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

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