Woah, are you new here? Cuz that poem sounds so good,it almost sounds plagurized!!! Wow...I'm stunned!!

Thanks for your comment, :-D.

Congrats!! I hope you like it here! There are a LOT of great poets. Thanks for your comments!! :-D. Keep writing!

Haha, I've been addicted to this site since the summer. lol, its so much fun!!! Good luck!

Exellent poem! Sad but very well written! Take Care! Brooke

excellent flow

great poem, very well written, great job!!

very good poem =) I voted a 5! Keep up the good job.. hugs

Your rhyme scheme changed a bit through the piece...Sorta made it bumpy...But otherwise, good.

absolutely amazing poem! first i've read of yours, and you're automatically going on my favorites!!

I enjoyed reading this poem. It was beautifully written and well expressed. Thanks for the comments. :)

I really like this, and I hope you don't mind me making a slight criticism on it.
'Nothing is left to feel
nothing inside me seems real'
these two lines don't fit in with the rest of the rhyming scheme,
your order of rhyme is...
A
B
C
B
Etc. (if that makes sense) but these lines make that one part so that it's,
A
B
C
C.
Just a bit of helpfull advice...apart from that, great poem! x

Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was really heart felt, and i like your poems because people can relate, and you seem to know how to produce emotions from your readers, thats a great gift.
Wonderfully written, looking forward for more!
always,
cate
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p.s thanks for the comment i really appreciated it.

intresting, i liked the words you used ub ut to make it more intriging. i think you need another paragraph though after the third one to lead it more into the last too, other than that it was great

WOW!WOW!WOW!WOW! This is really amazing! I really like it al ot! You are very talented and I'm gonna keep lookin at your stuff! Keep it up!
Love alwayz...
Haily
XOXOXOX

I already posted...I'm "Likuid Pain" just so you know...I still think this is a great poem!!!

this was pretty good. But in the 3rd stanza the rhyme scheme isnt the same as the others. In the others you rhyme the 2nd and last lines and in the 3rd you rhymed the 3rd and 4th. That was the only thing i noticed. Other than that, very good.

No Wonder This Poem Is Featured!! Its Golden 5/5!! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Very nice, I can relate to this. Hold strong hunz, *hug*
xoxo

WOW....SPEECHLESS that was a very good peice of poetry. The use of imagery was unbeleivable and i am in awe over how well i was able to literally picture something that was explain sooo well...it was a sad sad poem thou but written so very beautifully.
take care always 5/5
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Very good poem...

IT flows very well, and is filled with emotions=)

The rhyming scheme is good, and your use of words match the flow perfectly..

Great poem...

Really deep