nice poems deep...hope your friend realizes how much you need him/her...to stop...for you...5/5

Very good poem, though I am fed up with the whole "self-harm" thing...

but that's just me.

You are excellent at putting your thoughts into words..

Keep writing..

would you care to read and comment the last one i wrote?

this is really nice i no how hard it is to explain 2 someone that u know what there doin without trying to hurt there fellings this was very well written i hope it helps! take care xxx

Haley this is just one beautiful poem
i so love it, what a wonderful friend you must..why not give her this poem?
and let it speak for itself...
best wishes Doreen 5/5

Aww, That was really good, It flowed nicely. Check mine out sometime. Keep up the great work

Happy Easter <3<3
xoxo
Aubs

nice poem! you have written it so wonderfully!

thats such a thoughtful poem such a powerful message and keep trying to get the message accross ..all the best

take care! Great poem!

wow strong words...... i love this it certainly made an impact on me while i was reading it alot of my freiends and people i know are self abusive and it worries me so much but anyway great poem this is excellent stuff you are really talented