why you didnt see the tears my
love why did you went away

Hey James, who went away?? I sorry hun. If there is anything I can do to help let me know. I'm here for you. Good job on the poem though. Keep up the good work. Email me if you need anything!

Love ya,
Ash

thanks for the comment on my poem....this was very good but also sad....keep up the good writing!

Its really good, very deep. Comes from the heart.

Beautifully written, you have such talent, so wonderful its so great to read your poems..

well written.... liked it.... sad, but very beautiful... 5/5

hope u pass by mine =) votes and comments much appreciated... thanx

:( Such a prettiful last line, James. It's so beautiful, short, but still so sad. I love it to pieces, it's really moving. Got my own little picture in my head of the scene..Brilliant poem hun :)

Take good care of yourself,
All my love,
Laura.

Great write. I really liked it. <3333