yup... i know that feeling too. But... my lips never seem to stay sealed... someone always finds out... or i tell em....

love it! 5/5

.:kelly:.

Sweets, I do hope someday those lips come unsealed because you never know what could happen, always remember "nothing is impossible" ... I wish you the best!

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All The Love In The World,
~*Heather M Craig*~

OMG!!!!!!!! Carlee that has to be one of the BEST poems I've read on this site!!! Omg, PERFECT! :-D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So proud of you hun!!!!

hehe, love is so much like that.

love you lots,

~Sierra

OOOH!! That rocKed! With a capitol K. And you know what that means! Hehe. was that about ButtMunch or Sliced Bread?

Well, my dear Katie, I guess that is for me to know and for you to find out... lol, but to all you worried about my sealed lips, I'm not really sealing any lips... I'm kind of neutral in the crush department now. Sure, there's a few little ones, but nothing like this... I did used to be this way about Buttmunch, katie, but not so much anymore. Just more like buddies... Anyways thank you EVERYONE for comenting! lyl!
Car

oh, my gosh, carlee! this is incredible... i'm almost afraid to ask... who's it about, carlee?

Hmm, like I would tell? Lol...
Car

r u there?

yeah

*tear* I'm devastated, what about you?

Great poem, Carlee, Truly well written. hugs, lol, *Ann*

I am devastated. yes. Thanks, Ann!

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My heart says to go
My mind says to stop, to abide
My heart says my feelings must be shown
My mind says to keep it locked inside

That was beautyfully written..

as for the rest of the poem, it was good too, but some of the rhymes seemed forced, and it had an akward flow at some points...

A clichè, but nevertheless, interesting...I've read it twice, and decided I like it=)

Keep it up!