by Daniel Fink Mar 27, 2005
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Now I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, |
by Brookeღ
Good poem Thanx for the comments on my poem appreciate it. I haven't been writing that long so it's hard for me to give advice. The only thing I noticed with some of ur others is the rhymes needed some work but don't worry I have a time with that myself! Keep writing and I will keep reading ur poems! Take Care! |