this is a beautiful poem, very very very well written, i especially like the 10th stanza, the hole poem is really descriptive and very original. great work xxxxx

I'm speechless, can't believe how well written this is, though it's very looooong!!! It started out being so happy, but ended up so sad, I really like that twist!!! Beautiful poem...definately 5

cant believe that ive just read all of that it was amzing i was so taken it by it all take care xxxx well done

kick ass poem...f**king ruled...i dont know what else to say...but that its really long...and i must agree with the person before me...5/5

omg that was so sad....it was very interesting though..nice work... :)

Oh... I am sure all your reviews have mentioned this: but that was a sad yet beautiful poem!
I enjoyed every word of it; it had a unique and easy flow, the stanzas rolling together comfortably. The symbolic messages you used were terrific.
I completely loved the theme of the singing lady, alone, yet finding someone to love. A tragic ending it may of been; but a truly remarkable love journey.
I immensely admire this piece. It was long, yes, and I almost lost interest, but it was worth the patient read.
very talented. A surreal journey into a fantasy world that would exist only in our dreams.
"Then down from the height she slowly came,
her eyes fixed upon his,
and under the moon and the dark, sparkling sky,
she gave him a tender kiss."
That was my favourite stanza in this piece of poetic art.
A definite 5/5 from me!

sooo good! keep up the good job =)
I voted a 5 for this one! take care

oh my lord that was a long poems but yet it was so great awesome really i cant even let out a word!!!!!!!!!!!

My god, if i could write like that I would always be smiling. You have a great tallent.

Great talent.I loved this one.Keep it up.Jeff

thats a wonderful poem . luv it. keep it up 5/5
luv
nida

It was a bit long, but its a beautiful poem. Happy yet sad. Good job. 5/5

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

wow that is incredible and a greta read. an amzing narative poem although bvery sad

Jemma

Thanks for your comments. I only write about my true feelings because it helps me to deal with them thats all. I haven't got round to writing about other things yet. Amanda :)

Like ur poems. Maybe i'll be as good as you someday :)

Wow beautiful. I love poems like this, so beautiful and it must have taken forever writing. Loved it, keep on writing and take care.
Satuxxa

Awfully wonderful poem.
"as he saw her loose her life
" Loose should be Lose. Anyway, great write - I dunno why, but reminded me of Ireland. 5/5.

"and dark-brown was her sparkling eyes"

Was should be were.

Only technical comment I have, other than the fact that you have two stanzas near the end but closer to the middle that are sorta...sagging...compared to the rest. (12 from the end)

Otherwise, greatly creative. Very good.

yes the poem reads like an enchanting story i enjoyed it

WOW i think readin all that just killed me! I have goosebumps.. loved this poem!!!!
KT xx