Story to tell

by The Flame Within   Mar 27, 2005


Once there was a boy, young and innocent in his youth

But lived in a world that scared him with the truth

He lived in pain for a very long time in his life

He grew up thinking about the knife

He decided he wouldn't let the women hurt him win

He decided he wouldn't add on that sin

He never cut himself but was always ready

He even sat there with the knife against his wrist but kept it steady

He put it down and thought of the people he might hurt

He didn't want to cause anyone pain, so he takes off his shirt

He wraps it around his hand as he bangs a brick wall

Hoping that its his Mother and that it falls

When he is done he can barley move his hand

He grew up in a scared land

The moral of this story is plain in site

Beating your children is not right

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brandon

    Hey Nick,
    Its Brandon the girl who wrote you. Look down this poem comment to 1-03-2006, I commented. I love your poems. Just thought Id write and tell you that I did comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Jess

    Wow that is a great poem lol. keep up the good work 5/5
    xoxoxox
    Jess

  • 18 years ago

    by Brandon

    Hey Nick I just read this poem after breaking three off my knuckle doing the exact same thing, I like the poem and cant wait to see what else you come up with

    Brandon

    Please note dispite the name I am a girl

  • 18 years ago

    by christinea

    It's a wonderful poem..deep...keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    That was absolutlely positively fantastic great work your now added to my favs could you read one or two of mine please?
    if not dont matter
    great poem lovely flow
    love
    Em