by cac123 Mar 27, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Help this lonely child, |
by Amanda Bee
WoW!!! This is one of the best poems I have read in a long time!!! It was powerful and so sad. Amazing job! I loved it. 5/5:) |
This is so well written, I'm speechless!!! This is so emotinal and powerful, great job...Love it!!! |
Oh my gosh, I love this poem. Defidently one of my favs. >3jess |
I loved this poem too! And once again i have no sugeestions...except 1 NeVeR sToP wRiTiNg! |
AWSOME POEM it DESERVES A 5+ heartfelt poem with a flawless flow you might want to check the third line of the first stanza |