beautifully sad poem...Love it! i tried to give u a 5 but the damn thing wouldnt let me vote, sorry =(

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(¸.·´ (¸.·´`·-----~> God Bless
The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig
<3--Shauns Forever--<3

This is so good, I can relate to this poem and it really touched my heart, loved it, keep it up xxx

aww, that is really good, but yet very sad, i wanted to thank you for the comment and let you know that you to have amazing talent.
~best wishes~
_-*take care*-_
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-Kit

Wow, all I can say is that was a beautiful poem. Especially the last lines were good, I enjoyed this poem totally. Keep writing, take care,
Satuxxa

AWSOME POEM it DESERVES A 5+ heartfelt poem with a flawless flow you might want to check the third line of the first stanza
tell her why he life is like this
tell her why her life is like this

I loved this poem too! And once again i have no sugeestions...except 1 NeVeR sToP wRiTiNg!
Tash
xoxox

Oh my gosh, I love this poem. Defidently one of my favs. >3jess

This is so well written, I'm speechless!!! This is so emotinal and powerful, great job...Love it!!!

WoW!!! This is one of the best poems I have read in a long time!!! It was powerful and so sad. Amazing job! I loved it. 5/5:)