reality with a smooth rhyme

wonderful poem. I think you'll enjoy my poem "at the devil's door" considering they are somewhat alike. 4/5

brilliant poem, extremly strong and puts the point across well! superb

Very well written! 5! :)

I really did like this one it showed alot more deeper thought and was well done good job I wrote a poem calle Ominous Fate tell me what you think when you get the time

beautifully powerful.
brilliant job
5/5
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always,
cate