Millions Died (Oblivious)

by Dark Savior   Mar 27, 2005


While you slept in your nice coushy bed
100,000 people lay in the streets dead

while you wake up and get your shower
another 10,000 passed in that hour

while you go out and get your breakfast
25,000 more died hungry and restless

while you sat on your comfy little couch
a boy eats his meal two berry's from his pouch

flies around his body even in his eyes
mother and father dies, but no one cries

you'll get up and go to the fridge, disgusted; nothing there
think about the millions who don't have One to be bare

so the next time you think you have it the worst
think of the millions in Africa who died of thirst

one million dead before the day
this poem is my homage i tried to pay

© 2005 Shaun M.K

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  • 15 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    Hey! Its been a while since I have got to read some of my favorite authors poems. ( I rarely get on) I have read this before and wanted to share it with a friend. Thankyou for helping her open her eyes a little . This was a strong, powerful write. Very creative poet , I love your expressions.
    -Angela

  • 15 years ago

    by LadyLk

    Very nice.. its one of those poems you talk about wit ppl wen in deep conversation.. and show to ur friends.. beautifully written and it was very sweet of you to think of writing about such a subject!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by adroit

    Very moving poem. It conveys such an honest message. Keep writing. Honest Luck.

    Sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by Hatori

    Wow, that was deep. The words you used and how you described everything sent a shiver down my spine. It's strange, so many people don't think about what it would be like to have nothing. I'd say that the 6th stanza was definately the most powerful.

    I see nothing that needs changing ^^ Truly deserving a 5/5

    --Ashe

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    This is a excellent poem.It made me realize that there are people out there that have is so much harder then we do and we really need to be happy for what we have life could be so much harder.5/5

    *~JAMIE~*

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