I really thought this was a poem i should do. I want to know all your comments good or bad, i love to hear from you, your good or bad votes are welcome, i know i am not the best but i am trying to improve the best i can.

Let me know what you think.

Thank you for reading and or commenting and or voting on this poem, it means a lot to me and probably more to them.

I loved this poem especially the broad thought inside it.Its hard to realize and appreciate the human suffering out there if you have never witnessed.That means your poem is just not a mere poem but a bigger idea that we all need to look into.I applause you for this and give you 5.Jeff

It was different from the rest I'm use to reading. =o) Very well done... You got the point across and hopefully it will make others think and be greatful for what they have. Amazing! =o)

Such a sad poem, once again, makes you think of the world in a new perspective....i perdy much agree with everyone here....love the poem, expanding your creativity, love that!

love you
Heather
ps 5

excellent write!

wow awesome poem. you make me feel gulity and i guess i should feel gulity cuse i'm sitting here with a roof over my head, i have food on my plate at dinner and still i'm unhappy. :( okay.... well anyway wounderful poem like always 5.

~!~Noelle~!~

great poem.......it made me feel guilty as well, in my poems im always whining.....great message, and awesome poem.......keep it up, your poems are always good....~lots of love and hugs~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

wow you are deff. on my favorites. You are such a good writer. Thanks so much for commenting on my poems, it means a lot to me. I fyou ever wanna talk my email is lyssssss@hotmail.com, my msn screan name is lyssssss@hotmail.com and my aim sn is omg lyss is on
hope to hear from you soon, and never stop writing hunn. You truely have an amazing talent. I'm thankful that a writer as good as you even LOOKED at my poems ttyl lyss<3

HOLY MOLY....Are you trying to make people cry here??? WOW that was so sad!!! Thought provoking for sure!!! Excellent write!!

Superb poem!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

By the way, only fagg0ts leave rude, unintelligent, insulting comments like that!

So you don't like gay people. yet you enjoy to read peoms from probably some gay people here. So therefore i determine that you are racist. I never said she wasn't pretty..but then again i don't find any woman pretty anymore, because i a beautiful woman who no one can compare too. I think that by leaving all these rude comments it only proves my poinit that there is a lack of respect and compasion for another person.

I am not gay for i am with heather. You can say all you wish about me for i know in the end, the truth of the matter is. I'm a published writer by jove fiction. I am not worried about two "little girls" think about me. If you would kindly stop voting and commenting on my poems. i think that would be best, for i have no respect for you or your un-intelligence, it was merely a vagery of perception, Temperary constructs of a feeble human intelict trying desperately to justify their means.

Please leave me alone. Thank you and good by.

this is a really freat poem... its really sad cuz most people dont take the time to think about stuff like this, and even worse, lots of people just dont care. but reading this made it seem like someone actually has a heart! lol. plus it was very well written, great job, keep writing

wow.. very good.. well writin, it made me think..
love,
~Katie~

Ok, i am starting to get annoyed with that one. I hate the fact that i have to put up with twelve year olds such as untouchable. I am tired of listening to her. I am from canada and not the U.K. I have enough money to go and come as i please, because when you sell as many books as i did it doesn't matter. I think you should be quite. Why do you keep commeting back and forth if you don't care?

It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it.

I entertained your throught enough and i am tired of you commenting badly about my poems when you have to get your REAL LIFE friends to come and vote down my poems and yet i still get good marks.

Ya, i met her on the site? what's your point? least i got a girlfriend. Least i can with all honesty that i am true to her...i am not some bimbo who just keeps coming on here and writing comments on my poems and leaving rude remarks on them.

I gave you advice and you got mad about it. so LEAVE ME ALONE! btw, she lives in the U.S. and i live in canada. I could live there if i wanted too, but i don't considering all that is going on.

I think you should cut it out and stop voting all my poems 1s cause i am starting to get very annoyed with it. I know it is you because i am not stupid. all my five poems suddenly went down to fours or so. I think you should grow up and starting acting your age for once in your life.

you have two ears and only one mouth for a reason.

There's a part of every living thing that wants to become itself: the tadpole into the frog, the chrysalis into the butterfly, a damaged human being into a whole one. That is spirituality

when you grow up and learn how to take constructive critism then i wil comment back, but for now, STOP VOTING DOWN MY POEMS AND COMMENTING NEGATIVELY ON THEM. GROW UP AND LEARN TO LIVE WITH CRISTISM.

Signed,
Dark Savior Aka Shaun.

For those of you who had to endure that annoyance. I am very sorry. I should hope she will grow up and stop commeting on my poems.

I thank you for your patience and your votes. I am truely sorry, but i suppose some people's kids. You know?

Thank you for your patience again and i appreciate all your votes and comments that you give to me, feel free to tell me if i do something wrong, i don't mind it at all. I am always looking for ways to better myself.

wow...i'll think twice before i ever complain again. though dying on the inside hurts too...i'm more gratful for my life after reading this. awesome work.
xxxChristinaxxx

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii mate

God its beeen along since i checked my account nor this site,i was soo much busy,the first thing i did when i loged in is checkin ur poems to see whats new goin around. : )

I loved this Poem,its really like a hit on the head ! i mean its so much true true true...and worth talkin or writing about it : (

Hope ur Ok

:)

Peace
Darla

Oohhhh Darky...i know wut u feeelin about the Dropping voting thingii...God how i hate that thing and it happened to me with all my poems,just coz they were on Top CHarts ,someone is trying to crash them down : ((

its tooo sad

Take Care

Darla

Hey ,I Really Really MISSED U,i've never said it before ( to someone i dont know) but i guess i know you in some special way : )

so missed ur poems,n the one inside those poems !

Peace
Rua Francis.

It really makes me appreciate my life, and I'll try to to take things for granted. Very good message, keep up the good work. 5/5
Luv always, KT